RINCÓN DE COMPOSICIÓN

Estos textos son una entrega por capítulos que van realizando los alumnos de 1º de Bachiller y, van componiendo cada capítulo al estilo de escritores de novela, pero de manera colectiva. Iremos añadiendo nuevos capítulos según los vayan completando nuestros intrépidos escritores en inglés. Anímate a practicar The English


REVENGE

BY 1º BACHILLERATO
2010 /2011





CHAPTER 1
Alistair was really worried, so he got up although it was only 5'00 a.m. He went down the stairs and decided to have a nice cup of coffee.
- “I can't sleep because I'm worried, and I'm worried because Tiger says he has discovered something really incredible, something which can destroy me, but what can it be?”
When he entered the kitchen he found his dear wife on the floor, there was blood all around her. “Margaret is dead!”- Alistair thought. Alistair was paralysed for some seconds, what had happened to his love?
He rushed to the telephone and dialled the emergency number. After that he shouted to wake up everybody in the house. Some minutes later, his daughter, Dianne, her stupid husband, Damien and the faithful Pierre were in the kitchen.
- “Oh my God! Dad, what's happened? Mum, mum, please, wake up!” - Dianne said.
- “Oh God, this is trouble” - Damien thought, - “I need some whiskey”.
- “Sir, don't worry, perhaps she's only fainted and hit her head with the kitchen counter. Look! the ambulance is coming.” - said Pierre.
The doorbell rang, Pierre opened the door for the doctors. They checked Margaret's heartbeat, she was still alive. They quickly took her to hospital in the ambulance. While  Richman was going to his bedroom to get dressed, he gave Pierre some orders.
- “Pierre, I want you to phone the police and find son! I'm going to hospital with my wife”.
- “Yes, sir, immediately”, answered Pierre, but he was thinking about something else. “Oh, I can feel this hasn't been an accident, I know somebody has been in the kitchen with Margaret before she fell down, and I know who. I'll phone Inspector Sharp”.
                                      - End of Chapter One-

CHAPTER 2                                      

The doctor put Margaret in the ambulance and went to hospital. Alistair Richman went with them. In the house, Pierre called Inspector Sharp and he said that he would go to the Richman's  in the morning. The Richman family were home, all the family were very sad, Dianne was very nervous. Pierre went to the kitchen to prepare one lime for Dianne.
When Pierre entered the kitchen, he saw a knife under the table, the knife was covered in blood. He bent down to pick the knife and when he touched it, he had a flashback, he could see Dianne stabbing her mother in the back. Pierre was very confused. Pierre could see actions in the past as he had super-powers, because he had an accident with  electricity when he was a child. Pierre gave the lime to Dianne and all the family waited for the daylight.
Meanwhile, in the hospital Margaret died, but before that, Margaret,  with her last forces, wrote the letter "D" on a piece paper .  Mr. Richman was very sad and called his family to tell what  had happened. Pierre, Joshua and Damien started to cry, but Dianne didn't  cry because she hated her mother. In the morning, Inspector  Sharp went to Richman's , he saw the crime scene and the knife. The inspector was in the kitchen for six hours, but he found nothing.
When the family arrived at Margaret's funeral, the inspector found some chewing-gum in the kitchen. The inspector started to investigate the chewing-gum, it is a watermelon gum, Dianne's favourite flavour was watermelon. Inspector Sharp  thought that the gum belonged to Dianne. Pierre said nothing to the inspector because the family could discover   his secret powers.
In the afternoon, the family was in the living room and the inspector told them about his discovery. The inspector accused  Dianne and showed the chewing-gum to the family, the family was very confused and Dianne was very nervous, “Dianne always eats chewing-gum”. Alistair showed the family the paper where Margaret wrote  “D”. All of them accused  Dianne and she got even more nervous and started to cry. All the family was very angry and when the inspector was about  to arrest Dianne,  she ran to the window and she said:
-I hated mother! She didn't buy a new car for me, but Tiger gave me money to buy the car , ja, ja.
 -I am sorry, but I told Tiger the family secret.
Dianne jumped out the window and he died in the garden. Her husband started to cry.
Richman was sad and nervous, because Tiger had his secret and his wife and his daughter were dead. He was getting crazy.
Richman was on the verge of killing himself with a gun, but Pierre stopped him with his powers.
Now the inspector started to find Tiger. Dianne's husband helped the inspector. They went to look for the inspector's friend, Shad Openheimer, a GIA secret agent, but also Tiger's friend.

- End of Chapter Two -